Nice, dude
Ok so I'm not an expert by any means in this genre/style... so I'm going to make this as "un-biased" as possible.
I really enjoyed your synth work. It all worked/flowed quite well. The melody is better than anything I could come up with ;)
The percussion I felt was too simplistic throughout, which I think was intentional... but it still left me wanting more. I was just waiting for that nice crash followed by a busy hi-hat pattern, but it never came.
Overall enjoyable listen, with a very danceable feel to it!
p.s. feel free to take my criticism with a grain of salt, because i know nothing of hardcore/hardstyle whatever you call it ;)